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3-11-09: My grandma had been sick in the hospital for a few days due to her kideys. My grandma did have some blood tests done even including a catscan.She probably will be in the hospital until tommorow which means I get to see her after when I get my bractlies on from the dentist.I think she's goiing to make it and hopfully will be okay. They had to get fluide out of her kidnes because that's what blocking the kidneys for order for it to be okay.She is my favorite grandama in the world and I like her better then my parents sometimes. I hoped you will enjoyed reading this story about my grandma.

2nd Draft worked on 3-12-09. 3-11-09: My grandma has been sick in the hospital for a few days due to her kideys. My grandma did have some tests done including a catscan and blood work. She probably will be in the hospital until tomorrow which means I get to see her after I go to the orthodontist to get my braces on. I think she's going to make it and hopefully will be okay. The doctor had to get fluid out of her kidneys because that's what blocking the kidneys for order for it to be okay. She is my favorite grandama in the world and I like her better then my parents sometimes. I hoped you will enjoyed reading this story about my grandma.

I am done for now.